A Review: More

Posted by Amy Kittel on March 26th, 2011 filed in Heidi Marshall, Kindle

by Heidi Marshall

Published in 2010

An interesting story. Well, really, simple: girl+boy= love. Right? Maybe? Is it him? Or him? Not today?

The overall concept of the book was good. I just didn’t like the writing style.  I know I seem to be picky lately.  But, honestly, there are all these commas, parenthesis, and dashes, that could really be eliminated, the author would just rethink her sentences (get the picture?).   I got lost and confused in the many comma’d sentences and the parenthesis…. totally did not fit.  I even told my husband, “this book feels like something I wrote in 5th grade”.  He chuckled, but I told him I may have some of my old English papers to prove it!

Anyway, for the 5th grade effort I have to give it 3 stars.

Watch the book trailer here

 

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